we are working on using descriptive language by sharing our writing straight onto our blog.  The challenge we have is to describe a place using only six sentences. After reading the description you need to guess the place that has been described.


1. The suns shimmer surrounds me where. ever I go and where-ever I look..

2. Theres is water every where go.

3. you can hear the crank of a metal stick. twirling

4. you can also smell the nice traditional food. spreading

5. fish getting roasted to get eaten by people.

6.you can hear the coconuts falling down.